Guaranteed and Sponsored Chapters:
From now on, I will guarantee Four Chapters per month (That’s 1 per week). For each $10 I get sponsored with Patreon, I will guarantee an extra chapter per month. On top of this, I now offer a sponsored chapter. If somebody donates $10, I will write an extra chapter in the month and credit them.
Synopsis:
Due a strange goddesses obsession with the protagonist, he has lived many previous lives. Not only this, but he has spent time in heaven and hell. In his… Okay, let’s just say ‘next’, life the protagonist must finally face the insanity of the goddess head on. Just what situation has she gone and put him in now?!?
Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 1.5
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 5.5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 14.5
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
SS1
SS2
Volume 2, Prologue (1)
Volume 2, Prologue (2)
Volume 2, Chapter 1
Volume 2, Chapter 2
Volume 2, Chapter 3
Volume 2, Goddess (1)
Volume 2, Chapter 4
Volume 2, Chapter 5
Volume 2, Goddess (2)
Volume 2, History (1)
Volume 2, Chapter 6
Volume 2, Goddess (3)
Volume 2, Chapter 7
Volume 2, Chapter 8
Volume 2, Zana (Part 1)
Volume 2, Chapter 9
Volume 2, Chapter 10
Volume 2, Chapter 11
Volume 2, Lumi (1)
Volume 2, Chapter 12
Volume 2, Chapter 13
Volume 2, Chapter 14
Volume 2, Chapter 15
Volume 2, Chapter 16
Volume 2, Chapter 17
Volume 2, Chapter 18
Volume 2, Chapter 19
Volume 2, Chapter 20
Volume 2, Chapter 21
Volume 2, Chapter 22
Volume 2, Chapter 23
Volume 2, Chapter 24
Volume 2, Chapter 25
Volume 2, Chapter 26
oh~! This is currently good! Well, I like it… Though I don’t know in the future as the development and what-not maybe bring me unknown feelings…. will it be good or bad~? We will see, kukukuku…~!
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fufu~ Thanks for the support. 🙂
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Rumanshi Ichigo you sir deserve a cookie …when i am reading i dint know this is original web novel, it had quite the jap light novel effect which is ‘awesome’ and when you put a HAREM into it. i am all in pal. Keep up the good work and please add echi with it
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Hello, I’ve just only reach chapter 3. So please forgive me if I say anything wrong.
First, I would like to say that I’m impressed you’re writing web novels and I admire your courage.
Second, I would like to make a few observations that I’m quite curious about.
1) It seems that there are a lot of inner dialogue. Is it really necessary for there to be so many? Especially it’s just to bring 1 point across. I think a max of 2 analogies should be more than enough. Beyond that, it actually gets quite tiring. In a movie/anime/tv series/real conversation it might actually be ok (perhaps funny depending on the facial expression). But in written form (words), it passes off as if the author is using ‘stuff’ to give it substance where there is none. Sorry if it sounds offensive, but I’m really just giving, what I hope to be, constructive suggestions.
2) From what I’ve gathered, the main character (mc) should have gone through many reincarnations including going thru heaven & hell. Considering he has so many years (probably hundreds) worth of lifetime and experiences, why is his inner dialogue (it shows his way thinking) so immature? It’s pretty much on the level of a typical anime 3rd yr middle sch to 1st yr high sch student (age 15-16). It would be a more plausible if you’re able to show that his mature thoughts (thru his inner dialogue is fine). But I am very sure a person of a few hundred years old would not be thinking like the way he is doing now (as of chapter 3).
3) Are you using a speech to text program?
a) If so, I would suggest you take a look through it or check through before posting. The programs usually can’t tell the difference between ‘their’ and ‘there’. Chapter 1.5 has errors there.
b) If you are using speech to text, I can understand the long inner dialogue (1). As I’ve written, it’s find if it is used in an actual conversing situation. But in words, it is very repetitive and unnecessary.
Well, those are just my honest personal opinions. I don’t mean any harm. Use them or disregard them as you see fit because I understand there will always be a “writer’s personal style” and I do not want to force any style on you.
I wish you all the best and may your writing skills become better as you write more interesting and better novels. 🙂
Having said/written all that, I’m still keep reading it. For the moment, I’m interested in how the story develop. 😀
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Hey are you still translating
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… Third? Really? Darn, well I’ll give it a try when I have time.
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this is really good usually don’t read many original english web novels and this has not only caught my interest but makes me want to help in some way
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Thanks! 🙂 Just knowing that people like it helps me be motivated. :3
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Are you translating this web novel or are you actually writing it in english?
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This one I am writing. Hue.
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topwebfiction.com has a link at the bottom of the page to enroll in there poll. This could be a good way to bring in a larger audience.
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Thanks, I’ll look into it.
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Thanks! 🙂
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The title is luring me.. Is it only the title or is this really a harem?
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I promise you it’s harem. At the moment I’m developing situation and characters but it’s really a harem. 🙂
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lol good idea.. I mean, you have some demanding viewers out there when it comes to harems..
I was simply curious when I started to read the story, so I did not have any expectations but for some reasons the characters are clear and predictable to some extent (the king, elder sister). The MC has been reincarnated many times, so he’s definitely disillusioned but still not feeling down. The story’s “filter” is neutral, transparent : the character does what he feels is good to do, without wondering too much. This is fine for a beginning!
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I read the 14 chapters and liked them. Just for information, do you post new chapters on fixed intervals or randomly?
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Hi, thanks for reading (and liking)! I try to post a chapter a weak, at least once every seven days right now. I’m going to try and get better at keeping a better schedule which updates more often as well! But, there are occasional random posts ^.^
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Thanks for the info. I would like to highlight that chapter 14 is not being displayed under /thwafg page. Also clicking next chapter after chapter 5 says page not found. These problems aren’t troublesome at all though. Keep up the good work.
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A great story so far. I like the world and the characters. I’m also looking forward to the harem developing. ^_^
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Woo~. Thank you. The world and characters are really important for a harem story :). I’m looking forward to it as well!
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many this was good read for those who like tsundere character(s?) and having weak willed, and weakling MC who was easily pushed around by girls here and there but sadly for me i find it annoying ,
thanks for the story though i’m not continuing, sorry to say this but i really find it annoying or maybe this isn’t just for me 😦
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*many > maybe* btw
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tsundere characters? Other than the elder sister… Sorry you didn’t like it, hope you find a story you do like though.
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that’s why i indicated it as ** character(s?) ** ,ain’t i? meaning i’m not sure if there’s only one or many of them, rofl
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Haha, sorry. I didn’t think the MC was actually that pushable, but I guess it might seem like that. ~-~ Don’t worry, I wouldn’t write another tsundere character anyway… I don’t like them ;-;
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I was getting bored of OP for no reason MC reincarnation stories, this is a nice change of pace. I’m really looking forward to see where this goes.
Though I do feel like you should have either left out his last cause of death or expounded on it. ‘Cause I really want to know why he was betrayed.
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well though most are not a reincarnation stories if you want a not OP MC’s(at the start of the story) you should try xianxia/(wuxia?) novels, most MC at the start got to be called a trash or had been crippled, deceived, deprived, looked down upon, used, and was out of placed, etc..
it’s up to you to decide,
since it’s up to your taste not mine to like or dislike stories..
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I’ll look into it. Thanks.
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Sounds interesting! I read The Hero of the Shield and was really pleased~
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I’m loving the series so far. The goddess sending the mc to a world in which his soul will be lost upon death seems odd. I look forward to the reveal as to why she would do that. 😄
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Great work!
I’m looking forwrd for the next chapter 🙂
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Sry for double posting.
Some comments:
I found it very odd regarding the MC being inexperienced in 18+ stuff despite having many reincarnation and that perhaps this reincarnation might be different from all the other reincarnation seeing how it is heading towards harem.
Either way, this curious feeling is one of the point that made the novel interesting to read xD
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hmm…. I feel like it’d be a good idea to put rating on every summary page… like I need to know if it’s R-18 or PG-13 to know when to prioritize reading it. :p
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I don’t agree with those sorts of ratings so…
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Still waiting for that 15th chapter
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As am I. 😛
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I am enjoying the diversity of characters. I also find the random communications from the godess very well done. That poor MC.
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Thank you for reading.
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Thank for ur great work…
^^…
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Nice job I didn’t notice that it was an original work until I read these comments.
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I am sad, no chapter in two weeks.
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eh? 14.5 was released around 8 days ago? ;-;
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That was a very ninja chapter. I only found out about it by looking through last few weeks of posts. Oh gods ninja monsters……that’s just mean.
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I did’nt see it cause it was not listed on the links
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There’s no new update? D:
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Soon~
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I did say soon.
Fufufu.
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Thank you so much 😀
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A Question. If you don’t want to answer that’s fine as well. Will this be a Tragedy? Ever since i read and watched fucked up things i always check beforehand.
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Lol, it’s not going to be a tragedy. Haha!
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Thank God! Well without further ado i will start my reading! Thanks for the reply!
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:3 No problem.
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Do you usually do the chapter early and post it on a fixed schedule or write it after you post one?
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So, I’ve been trying to set up a schedule. Currently, it’s been I write –> I post.
In the next month, I intend to make up for my failure to keep up with a steady schedule by posting twice a week, doing the chapter a little early in order to quickly proofread it.
If you have any other questions, feel free. 🙂
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Got it..Thanks
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is the goddess like gasai yuno from mirai nikki? hahaha
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update please!!!!!!
damn I wanna elder sis reaction to them living in the same room.
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why u no update?
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I never thought that this one was an original work
wish i can do that too XD
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did u drop it?
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No, would have announced if I did.
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Is this series on hiatus or something?
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No, I’ve just been slow. Expect a new chapter in 1-2 days.
And then, another one 1 or 2 days afterwards.
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Keep up the good work writing this fine story! ❤
Loving the characters and their development, can't wait to read about how the lil angel will cause some havoc for the MC. ^_^
Btw, the SS links and V2 ch1 link are not working on the table of content.
Cheers and happy writing!
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by the way, why is this one not in NU?
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NU policy does not allow original English novels.
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ooh so this is an original.. i see i see.
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You can put it in Royal Road I just found out about that website and it has awesome harem stories like blackthone, sole survivor, axe of the north, and more that I can’t name.
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Nevermind what I said about putting this on RR just read all 20 chaps. Just keep your work on WP. Reasons why is the fact your MC is a puppet for a goddess. And is always gets pushover by every single side character in the story so far and makes ilogical choices. Really avoid RR because you will get shit ton of hate for your story. Well good luck with your story dood. HEE-HOO
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Hate is something easily dealt with.
If that’s what you think about Fei and the Goddess, then you are welcome to, however that’s not exactly the relationship between them.
MC is pretty dumb, huh?
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Oh snap you replied. Dood thanks nobody ever replies.Thanks dood. But all I see is the goddess looks at him as entertainment and moves him however she feels like it. That is just how I see it dood. Keep up the work hee-hoo.
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I don’t think the MC is dumb, I can see some of his choices being a “tad” impulsive and not well thought out. A good example being trusting the fairy that is practicing forbidden magix. It is understandable why he did so considering the amulet he has is a stopgap for his condition at best. But he could have thought it out a bit more. Most of the time he actually has good decision making processes and strives to better himself and its pretty awesome to see how it progresses. I also think he is quite lucky enough to know who exactly to curse went his life goes side ways.
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Any updates on THWAFG? Cause you missed the prologue and today’s the day you wanted to release ch 1. Did something happen?
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Yeah, addiction to gaming.
I’ll release the next chapters tomorrow.
Sorry
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Lol, as a gamer I can’t get mad even if I wanted to. It’s all good. Just excited for your work.
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Hey.
I have just read the story and I find it very interisting, I can’t wsit to see how will it develop. I have a few things to said to the author (DON’T WORRY THEY ARE ALL GOOD OPINIONS, I DON’T LIKE TO CRITICIZE A GENIUS, LOL)
Fisrt) a very good story and plot, when I was reading the story I could feek the emotions of each character, and let me tell you that not all the authors can do that, you hace a talent doing this.
Second) Will you continue writting this amazing story? Because it will be a pain if it suddenly stop been updating.
Third) Where can I make a donation? I read that if someone donates $10 will be 4 chapters per month and for each $10 extra an extra chapter; I would like to know in order to support you and continue seeing this amazing story.
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Hi, thanks for the praise! I am continuing writing this story, I’ve just been a little stumped, but I think I’ve gotten that fixed now.
To donate, you can go to https://ko-fi.com/6868HHFNOOBF and up the quantity to 5 (As it’s in $2 amounts)
Cheers for reading!
– Rumanshi.
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Thanks
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Hey!!! (>n^<)
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Hi. ^.^
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Why you haven,t update any new chapters?!?!?!
(>^<)
You said 4 chapters per month
(*_*)
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I just posted one a few minutes ago mate.
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Where?
I just see the same chapters
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https://rumanshi.com/2016/07/23/thwafg-volume-2-chapter-1/
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Thanks
But why it doesnt appear in the chapter list?
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Because I have to manually update the chapter list. I only updated it after you commented.
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Hmmm
That is troublesome
So… When is going to be next update and how can I read it?
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You mean after V2C1? In the next week, V2C2, V2C3 and V2C4 are all due. I’ll try and keep this page updated, but you can always just check out the front page for releases of things.
I’ve fixed up this page for V2C1 now.
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Arigatou~ (^u^)
I’m expecting dgreat things from you… Rumanshi Ichigo-dono
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Hey! Hey!
Hellow Rumanshi Ichigo-dono! 😊
If I am not wrong the month is almost over 😌
And you promise to update 4 chapters per month, plus the 3 new chapters that you “will” update this week 😑
😤
😪
So…😌
WHAT IS THE MEANING OF THIS?!?! 😈
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‘hopefully i don’t screw up’
It means that I’ve almost screwed up and the chapters would follow into next month. I’m still trying though.
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Hey!
The new chapters?!
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V2C3 will be out when I get home. V2Goddess (1) will be out after it’s finished completely, as will V2C4. V2G1 and V2C4 will be completed tonight, I think.
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V2C3 was released.
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the link to Volume 2, Chapter 2 can’t be enter it said “This site can’t be reached
thwafg-v2c2’s server DNS address could not be found. “
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the link for volume 2 chapter 3 is okay .Thank you for your hardwork.(T-T)
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Fixed.
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((T-T)7)
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Just curious on whether or not you plan to make a pdf or epub for Volume 1? Good series thus far.
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Hey, if I were to make a pdf for volume 1, it would be once I’ve managed to get a cover and some images created. It would also be fully edited.
Cheers,
Rumanshi.
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The link from chapter 13 to 14 does not work… please fix
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Also can’t get from the edited 16th chapter to the unedited 17th easily. No link, please fix
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Link from prologue 2 in vol. 2 to the next chapter does not work. please flix
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All of the errors should be fixed now >.<
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Thank you!
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I commented on a few chapters about missing links and such… those really just make going from one chapter to another easier. (Suggesting just trying the link after you post just to make sure they work fine…. or double check that there are links.)
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It’s really not me that’s breaking the links, it’s wordpress sometimes not updating or lagging so I mistype things. I double check the links most of the time, unless I’m in a rush.
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Thanks
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this is good, thank you
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I haven’t seen anything since the last chapter about Lumi. Not even any comments since back in March. Is everything alright? Have you just been busy lately? Or is the project on hold?
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Sorry, I barely update the TOC here.
Take a look at https://fantasy-books.live/the-harem-was-a-forced-goal/the-harem-was-a-forced-goal/
There should be more chapters there.
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Thanks for letting me know! I found your site randomly while searching the web, and ended getting pretty interested in your stories. Actually, I was kind of sad after checking back a few times and not seeing any updates, so I’m looking forward to catching up again.
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So I’m did you stop writing this perchance or what cuz its one of the best wns I’ve found in a while
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This is good!
I’d agree with some other commentators that the interior dialogue bits might be a bit on the lengthy side, but otherwise excellent. It’s nice to read something like this where the protagonist isn’t totally over-powered (cough… smartphone… cough).
Good work, keep it up!
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Are you gonna put an entry in novelupdates for this series?
I often use novelupdates to track new relase on for my novel reading list
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Novelupdates is a tracker for Asian translated novels only. THWAFG is an original English novel written by me.
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